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Epilouge-The Tell Tale Heart by ~EvilBlueStickFigure:iconEvilBlueStickFigure:



Epilogue to Edgar Allan Poe’s The Tell Tale Heart



No sooner than I confessed, the cops started walking towards where I was sitting. I threw my chair against the wall and it smashed with a very loud sound that startled the cops, but did not stop their search. I had to act quickly if I wanted that terrible sound to stop, so I took a sharp ended piece of wood from the remains of the broken chair, and stabbed the first cop then the second with it. I then hid the two of them with the old man, but took out the old man’s chest. It was finally time to end this horrible sound that had been haunting me with such intensity. I took the chest into the kitchen with me, grabbed a knife, and cut open the old mans chest. I then ripped out his heart and took it into the sitting room where I could burn it in the fireplace.  I watched his heart slowly burn, but when there was nothing left, I still heard that awful noise. As I was about to go back to where the old man was hidden and try to find the source of the noise, I heard people running down the hall. I panicked and tried to barricade the door with whatever I could find, but it was no use, I could hear the intruders trying to ram down the door. I couldn’t take it any more; I couldn’t stand the noise a second longer. I decided to end this horror once and for all, so I took the knife that was used on the old mans heart, and used it to end the noise the only way I thought possible. I stabbed myself, and finally, yes finally the noise was gone.
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In my lang arts class for a grade i had to write an epilouge to The Tell Tale Heart by Edgar Allan Poe, i thought i would post it to get some opinons on it.

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~SChedgehogxX:iconSChedgehogxX: May 17, 2008, 3:15:57 PM
Seems a little rushed. You should have gone deep into detail about the insanity of the character, rather then what he actually did. But good attempt. =D

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~EvilBlueStickFigure:iconEvilBlueStickFigure: May 17, 2008, 3:18:49 PM
ehh, i did it the morning it was due so it was very riushed, but had i acually done it before it would have been much better. I might consider revising it and putting the revised version on seperately then deleting this one.

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~SChedgehogxX:iconSChedgehogxX: May 17, 2008, 3:29:06 PM
You should do that. =D I know you have much better writing abilities, I mean, LOOK HOW MANY BOOKS YOU READ! XD

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I am the Cold Blooded Alchemist, FEAR ME! =P

"Take out the impossible, and whatever your left with (even if it is unprobable) has truth to it"
-Sherlock Holmes

"Man! Its hotter out here then two chimeras mating in a boiler room!" -Edward Elric
~EvilBlueStickFigure:iconEvilBlueStickFigure: May 19, 2008, 5:11:44 AM
lol i know i can, yet im going to wait untill i acually feel like writing it, this might be a while cause i got finals this week. T.T

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This space is reserved for my new sig, which i will think up whenever i feel like. (which may take a while) but first, i must fix my bloddy wi-fi on my wii.
~SChedgehogxX:iconSChedgehogxX: May 19, 2008, 3:42:10 PM
I know how you feel. @_@

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I am the Cold Blooded Alchemist, FEAR ME! =P

"Take out the impossible, and whatever your left with (even if it is unprobable) has truth to it"
-Sherlock Holmes

"Man! Its hotter out here then two chimeras mating in a boiler room!" -Edward Elric
~EvilBlueStickFigure:iconEvilBlueStickFigure: May 20, 2008, 5:05:45 AM
at least you get out early after finals, i have to stay and suffer in school. x_x

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This space is reserved for my new sig, which i will think up whenever i feel like. (which may take a while) but first, i must fix my bloddy wi-fi on my wii.